Weather Deux

Everything, even under-leaves,
Is soaked; water taps softly
On the cottage roof and sluices
Lazily in runnels everywhere.
Dock’s posts are mirrored
On its liquid surface;
A puddle sits on the boat roof canvas.
Sky and river are grey —
It’s early yet: tree bark is still dry.
The river surface, rippling slightly
In the almost nonexistent breeze,
Is pixellated by the insistent raindrops
Which softly fade the distant river shores.
And not a leaf moves. Except
For the drumming of the rain, no bird,
No boat, no other sound at all.

— August 27, 2006

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About riverwriter

Poet, playwright, duplicate bridge player, website designer, cottager, husband, father, grandfather, former athlete, carpenter, computer helper for my friends, theatre designer, backstage polymath, retired teacher of highschool English, drama, art, a baritone singer in a barbershop quartet, who knows what else? wordcurrents is on Facebook: Doug also has a Facebook page, "Incognitio", related to his novels.
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2 Responses to Weather Deux

  1. drew says:

    I like this a lot, especially the last three lines.. It’s ‘pixellated’, by the way. Very inspiring

  2. riverwriter says:

    Thanks for the heads-up on pixellated; “pixilated” is entirely the wrong concept — comes from writing too fast. According to my notes, I wrote it in nine minutes. I guess speed is not all . . . .

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