Haiku 6

bronze-faced sunrise
traces golden verticals
upon surprised birds

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Poet, playwright, duplicate bridge player, website designer, cottager, husband, father, grandfather, former athlete, carpenter, computer helper for my friends, theatre designer, backstage polymath, retired teacher of highschool English, drama, art, a baritone singer in a barbershop quartet, who knows what else? wordcurrents is on Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/wordcurrents/ Doug also has a Facebook page, "Incognitio", related to his novels.
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2 Responses to Haiku 6

  1. drewgold says:

    i like it a lot and found no qualms.. good economy of words and i loved the break between verticals/upon .. almost animates it

  2. riverwriter says:

    Thank you. Sunrise has always fascinated me, from my days diamond drilling in the far north on night shift, when I could watch the sun rise from the top of the drill rig.

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