Haiku: variations on 2

2:

horizontal dawn
painting golden verticals
silent song for eyes

3:

horizontal dawn
splashes vertical gold sides
onto the tree trunks

4:

horizontal dawn
dabs sides of trees and houses
on the misty islands

5:

horizontal dawn
approaches birdsong chaos
sweet anxious lover

6:

molten-faced sunrise
traces golden verticals
upon surprised birds

7:

bronze violet dawn
claim all eastern facing love
with your silent shout

8:

Shout silent sun
splash your golden furnaces
on whatever stands

9:

Shout silent sun
splash your molten fanfare out
claim the vacant sky

10:

Shout silent sun
brand the embers of the night
steal the dark away

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Poet, playwright, duplicate bridge player, website designer, cottager, husband, father, grandfather, former athlete, carpenter, computer helper for my friends, theatre designer, backstage polymath, retired teacher of highschool English, drama, art, a baritone singer in a barbershop quartet, who knows what else? wordcurrents is on Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/wordcurrents/ Doug also has a Facebook page, "Incognitio", related to his novels.
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